Saturday, March 5, 2011

my creative writing Will Allen



using this picture to the left we had to write about it using on of the six choices : 1 imagine you are the character using poetry or short storyexplain who you are and what you are doing. 2 write a letter to the person in the picture and talk about the scene he is in. 3 write a advice colum. 4 imagine you are awarding that person for their accomplishments. 5 write as if you are the person in the picture's son or daughter. 6 give one of the characters a tough past.

Well of course i choose to do number 5. It went a little like this (tell me your thoughts or comments) :

Dad what i remember is how your strong arms held me and protected me from all the danger and harm. You were there when I needed you, you came when I called , and disciplined me when didnt feel like I should of been. Dad what I really remember is you hugs and how warm they were ,but most of all I dont know how
I could of remember when I never met you in the first place.

1 comment:

  1. I really got a feel for what you were saying and this is very deep and personal keep up the good work... When I read this I was expecting more!!

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